I am a Year 4 student from Aotearoa New Zealand. This blog shows my learning journey so it is not perfect. Please comment on what I did well and what I could do to improve.
Wow Samuel - this is a flashback from the past! I had forgotten about this project some students did as part of our Matilda Chapter Chat project! I am looking forward to you sharing more of your recent learning here! 😃
Hi there Samuel It me Bob I am a student from Hay park school and Today i'm here to give you some feed back on your work. Lets get started well I liked the slide show of hero and bad people it really made me felt like reading this and the picture gave me lots of detail but the writing there were not that much detail and you should check for capital letter full stops that all I got to say. BYE!!
Wow Samuel - this is a flashback from the past!
ReplyDeleteI had forgotten about this project some students did as part of our Matilda Chapter Chat project!
I am looking forward to you sharing more of your recent learning here! 😃
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ReplyDeleteHi there Samuel It me Bob I am a student from Hay park school and Today i'm here to give you some feed back on your work. Lets get started well I liked the slide show of hero and bad people it really made me felt like reading this and the picture gave me lots of detail but the writing there were not that much detail and you should check for capital letter full stops that all I got to say. BYE!!
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