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Owl of the devils
This week we have been learning about DASH? paragraphs for adventure stories.
- D = describe the setting
- A = use action
- S = use speech
- H = describe how the character is feeling
- ? = use a cliffhanger or rhetorical question
We wrote collaboratively today.
As Craig and Sam trotted into the gloomy forest they could see a dim, flickering light in the distance. As they got closer to the light they could see a owl smoking a cigar and wearing a top hat. Suddenly the owl flew down on them ready to “Run” screamed Sam he heard no reply. Sam was frozen with fear he stood still like he was in a trans. Sam fort was he about to die.
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